| Q: I'm an Aussie married to a Canadian, living
in Colorado Springs for the next three years. I've written
two scripts, one has been picked up by a Canadian producer in Toronto,
the other has interested a Vancouver production company. My question to
you is: should I have a writer's agent or not? Thank you for your time.
A: Howdy, Mate!
Now, on to your question: Yes, definitely get an agent! Or a good entertainment
lawyer. Either will be able to 1) Advise you on exactly what you're worth
(which is usually always more than you think you are; 2) Negotiate better
for you than you can; and 3) Watch out for pitfalls and "omissions" in
the contract that might later come back to bite you in the butt. As the
saying goes, a man who represents himself has a fool for a client...
I should know (yeah, yeah -- I should also know BETTER!). My agent's
on vacation and a situation just came up where a signed deal memo had to
be on a certain producer's desk in Munich by start of business this morning.
My lawyer, unfortunately, was also busy, so the US producer and I ended
up doing the deal ourselves late last night.
This morning my lawyer found at least five points that might
inadvertantly void or seriously hamper me getting paid from the Europeans
if the deal goes through.Yig!
Luckily, the US producer's an honorable guy and he and my lawyer are
working to correct the gray areas; but in someone's hand who was less scrupulous...
A word to the wise.
Back to the questions
Q: I was told by one producer that agents get in
the way....they stop the writer and the producer from "getting together"
and making the most out of the story.
A: Crap! Agents stop producers from taking advantage of writers in any
number of ways, least of which is free work (drafts and rewrites) which
a new writer is often all too willing to give up in return for that all-elusive
credit.
Back to the questions
Q: But I've also read that if the writer doesn't
have an agent then no one will want to work with you?????
A: Also untrue (witness the producer above...). Over all else, an agent
is a cachet...an instant sign of credibility...a fillip that says "I'm
good enough to GET an agent, therefore I'm good enough to be taken seriously."
Agents come in all shapes and forms, from strict 10-percenters to people
who become lifelong friends and Godparents to your children. A good agent
knows all the rules (in your case, both WGA AND WGC would be useful...),
has heard all the producers' lies and excuses, knows who's buying what,
for how much and why, and is often your first and best critic and critiquer.
S/he's usually the first objective person to read your masterpiece (forget
your mum) and make suggestions, your biggest fan and your best cheerleader.
An agent's a "good thing" (tm)
Back to the questions
Q: I have recently registered my screenplay with
the writer's guild and was wondering if I should I put the registration
number on the cover page.
A: The question of putting a WGA registration number on one's script
rages daily. My opinion is -- DON'T.
At this point your job is to appear as professional and 'seasoned' as
you can to any potential Reader, and pros don't put numbers on their scripts.
It's just a given we register our scripts and have a number.
The simpler the cover sheet, the better. I use script name (centered,
both vertically & horizontally, and underlined). Double-spaced under
I put "written by" and single-spaced under that my name.
In the lower (about even with the bottom hole) left I put "Represented
by," one-space below that my agent's name and a space below that
her phone number. All left-justified. In the lower right, right-justified,
directly across from 'Represented by' I put: "®1999/WGAw." One space
below that, still right-justified, just to belabor the obvious I add: "All
Rights Reserved." (NOTE: In case the symbol before the 1999 didn't translate
thru your carrier, that's an 'R' with a circle around it: The universal
mark for 'registered.'
Anything else is NOT gravy, it's detrimental to a Reader's frame-of-mind
when he opens the script. He MUST constantly believe he's readingsomething
by a professional writer who knows and understands how Hollywood likes
its product delivered.
Back to the questions
Q: I’m writing because I would love to become a
published writer. However I don’t know the first thing and was wondering
if you could help. Thank you so much for your time.
A: A published writer writes books, a produced writer writes plays or
screenplays. Which is it you want?
If you want to become a screenwriter the first thing I'd suggest is
you read every script you can get your hands on. There is nothing better
for you than reading other's successes and mistakes. There are many websites,
books and magazines that offer scripts. Your local library or university
might have some, also. Another good source is the site of an E-script workshop
attendee Leslie
Odell, Screenwriter, Los Angeles. She has many great links to industry
and script sites.
Contiguously, learn big, obscure words like "contiguously." Okay, I
promise to behave -- must be the start of autumn that brings this facetiousness
out in me.
But, at the same time you're reading, begin learning WHAT you're looking
at in those scripts. Buy a good scriptwriting 'how-to' book. I like Syd
Fields. His books can be found anywhere and, though his 3-Act structure
has gone out
of favor the past couple years, it's still the best I've found for
basic s'writing. From it learn about structure, then compare what you're
learning to what you're reading in others' scripts.
Finally, when you're fed up with reading other people's work, begin
your own. But not the script -- no, no, no! First you have to find out
whether you have a story...
In my E-script class I start with a sentence -- called a logline, like
you'd find in the TV Guide -- then several sentences, then a paragraph,
then a page, then a fleshed-out 10-15 pages of description and sample dialogue.
When you finally believe you have a great story that's properly structured,
with all the 'beats' hitting at just the right points...begin the script.
Try to write 5 pages a day. The next day go back and edit that down
to one good page. Condense ... condense ... condense. If you end up with
one good page a day, one good scene a week, one good act a month, you're
doing great for a beginner!
At the same time, continue reading others' scripts, continue reading
Syd Fields or whomever you chose to be your guru and continue thinking
about YOUR script all the time. Mold it in your head; shape it; refine
it; and when you get back on the computer, make those changes and then
move on.
Try to get Act One (25-35 pages of good, tight dialogue & action)
in the first month, then move on to Act Two, and finally the finale.
Easy, huh? <g>
Back to the questions
Q: If you could recommend one piece of Play/Screenwriting
software, which would it be? I'm getting tired of designing macros
and editing margins. I just want to flow and not think about the
format requirements.
A: Hands down, the best scriptwriting software on the market is Final
Draft. It's pretty much the "industry standard" here for scriptwriting
apps. Either get version 4.1 or 5.02. The earlier versions of 5.0 had some
bugs they subsequently worked out.
Back to the questions
Q: Can anybody write a script?
A: It used to be easier to be a writer -- back when there were only
typewriters. It was a labor of love then, and the field was relatively
clear. Now, with the advent and ease of computers, anyone with a keyboard
and half a mind (and believe me, that's giving some writers a LOT more
credit they don't deserve!) can churn out a script and call themselves
writers.
Feh!!
The trick is to write scripts well. Only a few can do that (and not
always the ones who get their stuff sold). The trouble is, the field's
so littered with instant wannabes today it's hard to discern the serious
players.
The question is not who CAN write scripts, but who SHOULD. If you can't
do, or imagine doing, anything else with the rest of your life than write,
then you'll probably make a pretty good screenwriter. If you're just in
it for fame and/or money stop making it harder for the rest of us -- become
a producer.
Back to the questions
Q: I am not in the business but am an avid movie
lover. I have a burning idea for a movie script and want to write a movie.
What made you decide to become a screenwriter? What was the first thing
you did to get started and what was the first thing that you wrote?
A: I've always written. I don't know what "made me decide to become
a screenwriter" ...what makes anyone become anything? I've always loved
words. How they're formed, where they come from, how they're used. You'll
hear my
mantra quite a lot here: If you cannot NOT write, you're probably destined
to be a writer.
I started out in high school on the school newspaper. I majored in Journalism
in college, with a minor in a lot of creative writing. That's where all
the really cute girls hang out, y'know? I also have another degree in Communications
& Film. One of my professors at SDSU was Bob McKee, who went on to
found his own scriptwriting empire up here. Another was Norman Corwin,
the "Dean of American Radio Drama." That was a great class -- when you
write for radio you really have to know and love words! I was married to
a British stage actress then, and seeing and reading a lot of plays --
especially the classics -- helped also.
I've also written magazine articles, poetry (one of which was even turned
into a full symphony -- with chorale!), songs, what-have-you. Everything
but short stories and novels. Novels are just not my "thing."
I got into screenwriting on a fluke (and not the slimy kind you find
in tide pools, either!). One semester I wanted to take a creative writing
course but it was full. Somone suggested a scriptwriting class instead.
It was taught by the head writer/producer for the old "Route 66" TV series
(a show probably WAY before your time...). I found I liked the structure
of screenwriting and that I was good at "seeing" scenes and acts play out
in my head.
I guess the first thing I wrote was a "M*A*S*H" spec script (at the
time, I was strictly interested in TV). It never got bought, but it opened
doors for me. Spec scripts are always useful in selling yourself. My first
paid assignment was a "Hart To Hart" episode, mentioned somewhere else
in this Q&A.
It wasn't till much later I switched to films.
In your case, if you have a burning idea for a script by all means have
a kick at the cat, as my Canadian friends say. Buy Syd Fields' screenwriting
book and read it. It'll show you all the basics and get your juices flowing.
Write the idea in one sentence, then a paragraph, then a page, and finally
a "step outline" with one or more (short!) paragraphs defining each scene.
(See question above.)
If you're not burned out by this time, and you objectively feel you
have a good story, start writing! "See" each scene in your head and try
to write so your reader(s) can envision the same thing up on the big screen.
Go see as many films, or rent as many videos, as you can, in your genre
(romcom, a/a, horror, western, comedy, erotic thriller, drama, etc.). Dissect
them as you watch, trying to pick out where the "beats" are, the turning
points, climaxes & mini-climaxes (pretty easy in erotic thrillers...<g>),
denouement, payoffs, etc. Feel the flow of a film. Go see bad movies --
often you'll learn more than from good (seamless) ones.
Read as many scripts as you can. There are tons of script services on
the 'net. Reading others' work will do more than anything else to solidify
your own style. I owe my semi-colon usage to some poor writer 10 or 15
years ago... He wrote a bad script, but wrote it well. Again, it's often
more instructive to wade thorugh bad scripts than good ones -- you can
really see what doesn't work and why.
Write! Write a little each day. Don't be discouraged. Don't quit. Don't
let it be one more thing you started and then dropped, like that Tai Bo
class. Write five pages a day, then go back and edit three of them out.
Plan on taking a month or so for your first draft -- later it'll be much
easier, like any exercise.
That's my style. Others like to plow on through a rough draft, never
going back and never correcting anything till they're all done. That way
they can see the thing as a whole. YMMV... As with style, HOW your write
is a personal thing. As long as you DO IT!
Hope that helps. Good luck!
Back to the questions
Q: How'd you end up directing your own screenplays?
A: The first had nothing to do with writing UNTIL I started directing,
unfortunately. And by then it was too late to save it anyway. <g>
Let me begin by telling you "Paradiso" (originally titled "Escape From
Paradiso" and now known as "Caged In Paradiso") was a very low-budget,
B-minus movie and never had aspirations to be anything else. The company
was originally going to shoot in Hawaii but our sleazy producer pissed
off one of the more vociferous unions there and they put a contract out
on him. So the production moved to the Virgin Islands.
Now don't ask me why a low-budget company would think they could shoot
a movie on very little money in the most expensive islands in the world...!
That's always been a mystery to me, though I have my suspicions there was
more going on I didn't know about than shooting a movie.
Anyway, when the producer fled from Hawaii that's when I came on board.
A line producer friend I'd worked with before as First AD called and asked
if I'd like to ramrod the production for him (because of my background
in post-production, production and writing I'm hired a lot to work with
first-time directors). Well, it's easier to shoot a bad movie in the Virgin
Islands than the Mojave Desert, so I said yes (actually, I think I said
"Hell yes! You bet!! and then hung up did cartwheels. Hey -- 8 weeks paid
work in the Virgin Islands...?!!).
The director was a really esoteric woman who didn't have a clue. She'd
done a no-budget art film the year before that had been reviewed favorably,
which was enough for our producer to drag money out of some investors.
But the director had taken almost a year to shoot her little art film --
making some
money and shooting a scene or two, then going back to work to make
some more money, etc. -- and didn't have a clue how to organize herself
to film 6-8 pages a day on a tight, almost TV, shooting schedule.
Consequently, despite the producer's, my friend the line producer's
and my best efforts, after 4 days we were 3 days behind! If the picture'd
been bonded they would've canned us all, but as the producer had private
investors we all kept our jobs. So on the 4th night the producer and line
producer came to me and asked if I'd take over (the producer would've directed
it himself but by this time the actors all hated him, too, and he wasn't
allowed on the set). I'd been "massaging" the script a lot, and on top
of breaking it down and all had a very firm grasp of the story line. So
I said yes.
We won't talk about the director coming to my room, drunk, demanding
to know what she'd done so wrong ... then trying to turn the actors
against me.
So -- I directed it; brought it in on time and pretty close to on budget,
though there were desertions and insurrection among the crew and cast the
whole time. In the end Irene Cara was doing her own makeup and helping
out with wardrobe because the crew had quit (they were pretty sure the
producer was going to stiff them their last week's pay, so they just took
off one night to hang out on another island).
Doesn't this all sound like Bowfinger or The Big Picture or one of those
"mockumentaries" on low-budget film making? Believe me, it happens just
like this all the time...!
There were opening scenes we didn't shoot that we were supposed to pick
up back in Los Angeles, but when the time came I was never informed. It
turned out the producer did them himself so he wouldn't have to pay me
anymore money
(tho I continued to get my AD pay he stiffed me $20,000 for my directing
fee). Live and learn. Unfortunately, the stuff he shot for the opening
and his editing were so bad I couldn't even use the film as a sample of
my work to get another job. Not that the stuff I DID shoot was all that
great...
That's Paradiso. Fun, huh? Now "Savage Land" was a completely different
experience...
I'd just written, Line Produced and AD'd a low-budget erotic thriller
for and with a really nice Canadian guy. I also shot a lot of the 2nd unit
action as we were moving so fast with so little money we had to keep two
units working the last week to make it.
In the e/t script there was a female cop who's character I liked, so
I wrote a sequel for her. We were hoping to interest a bigger actress and
get a little better budget to shoot it. The Exec. Producer we took it to
wasn't interested, but asked us how we felt about family films...
Well, I'd been wanting to write something my kids could be proud of
for a long time, so we said "Sure! I can write one and my friend can direct
it" The EP had a basic idea about 2 kids on a stagecoach that gets ambushed.
There's also a girl on it...the EP's wife. By the time I got done there
were TWO girls -- my friend the Canadian director wanted to put HIS g'friend
in it, too.
What's that Rob't DiNiro movie...? The Girlfriend? Believe me, it's
all true.
But, I was very proud of the script regardless. I think it still holds
up, budget or no budget. Another friend, Russ Gray, did a hell of a great
job casting it, considering we had little money. We ended up with Graham
Greene, Corbin Bernsen, Brion James, Marty Kove, Charles Napier, et al.
Great cast and all a lot of fun to work with. Especially Graham, you Canadians
will be happy to hear. He's a great raconteur and very pleasant to have
dinner with.
About this time my director friend decided we should film in Canada
because of tax breaks, so we moved everything to Calgary. In fact, I think
that was one of the pluses in casting Graham. He's Canadian and we needed
the content credit...
I went up several weeks early to scout locations. It comes in handy
wearing a lot of different hats in low-budget filmmaking. Besides, my wife
at the time was a big location manager and I'd picked up a lot from
her). One day I met a billionaire who was interested in the movie business.
He offered us his executive retreat in the Canadian Rockies in return for
I-don't-know-what -- that was between my friend, our Calgarian line producer
and him. Whatever, we got the run of his fantastic lodge and "guest" cabins
(each with sunken whirlpool tubs, etc. Yeow!) And this was all in the middle
of a pristine valley where you could turn 10 degrees and be shooting an
entirely different set. Woods is woods, as we used to say...
But we were still under money constraints and my friend and I were so
used to working the way we did I took over the 2nd unit work again, filming
action stuff and even scenes with principals. We made it on time and, despite
the low-budget aura to it, I'm very proud of what we did. What's even better
-- my kids like it to this day, which was what I'd set out to do in the
first place. |