Q: What's the best way to go about training as
a screenwriter?
Do you have a gerbil with a little spinning wheel in its cage that it
likes to run on, going nowhere for hours and hours at a time? Study
him very hard.
Okay, just a bit of cycnicism there. Screenwriting training, hmmm
. . .Watching and absorbing as many movies as possible is always a good
starting place. Not just once, but several times. The first
time through, enjoy the experience of the movie as pure audience member;
it's very important to retain that perspective as you begin creating
your own movie stories. You want to be able to recreate the kinds
of experiences that greatly affect you. Then watch them again, this
time with a more critcical eye, observing what made the moments you either
liked or didn't like work or didn't work. A great tool for this is
to turn off the sound. Yes, you won't be able to hear the
dialogue, but you also won't be caught up in it, the music and sound effects
and will be able to watch the film as a purely visual story. When
it's all said and done, movies are called movies because that become short
hand for "moving pictures." Pictures that move. Too much focus
is put upon dialogue as being the main contribution of the screenwriter
to a movie. The truth is that dialogue is the most expendable and
malleable component of a script there is; it is the first to be changed, the element most
changed during production, then changed again in post production
dubbing in a process known as ADR -- Automated Dialogue Re-Recording --
either for clearer sound or to change entire meanings of edited scenes.
And that doesn't count the changes that will come later when it's translated
for foreign countries and chopped up for broadcast TV. Is it important?
Yes. Is it all-important? No. So watch movies
without the sound and study how the scenes are constructed and flow into
one another and see how much you can follow a movie purely visually.
Okay, so you're watching movies; now read them. Find the
scripts to movies you really admire and enjoy and see how they were written
and constructed. There are many sources these days for scripts: in
published books, Applause Books does a great job because they publish the
scripts in the correct format, page-for-page as the author wrote them,
plus has interviews with the authors. Some of their books are: THE
FISHER KING: The Book of the Film by Richard LaGravenese, JACOB'S LADDER
by Bruce Joel Rubin and TERMINATOR 2, JUDGEMENT DAY: THE BOOK OF THE FILM
by James Cameron & William Wisher. Faber & Faber publish many good
screenplays, but beware: they are NOT in the right format. Read for
content, not format style. [Editor's note: We interrupt Bill for this plug:
you'll find a large selection of published screenplays in the E-script
Bookstore. Now, back to our regular programming.]
The new quarterly magazine SCENARIO is an excellent source of scripts;
again the format is all wrong, but the scripts are great and they have
in-depth interviews with the authors.
There are places in LA, such as Script City, that have mail order services
selling real scripts, scripts hot off the Xerox machines at studios
and agencies. What I like about these catalogue services is you can
order scripts that were never made into films, such as William Gibson's
version of ALIEN 3. You can find these places advertised in the back
of most movie magazines like PREMIERE.
And also, the Web contains some scripts that can be downloaded for your
private use; it used to contain more sources for scripts, but copyright
questions raised their hydra heads and closed several sites. One
spot still running is Drew's Script-O-Rama.
The selection is very diverse and though it does veer more toward genre
material, there are some real gems here. Plus Drew has a wide selection of Television scripts
for those of you who are multiplex-ly challenged.
IMPORTANT CAVEAT!
Beware of Transcripts Posing as Real Screenplays!! What's the
difference? A transcript is just what it implies: someone sat down
with a VCR and painstakingly wrote down every single line of dialogue and
lightly sketched out all the scenes' main actions. What it doesn't
do is tell you what the writer originally wrote -- none of the scene description,
not the original order of the scenes as they were written nor any of the
writer's style and syntax used to make mere black words on white paper
come to life and persuade someone to finance a movie.
I admire people's tenacity and resolve for undertaking such a project,
because I believe it may have some merit as an exercise for themselves
(it forces the transcriber to focus on what exactly is taking place on
screen), but I think it is useless as a resource for people looking to
read scripts to learn from.
It also underscores the common misconception I spoke of above: that
dialogue is the most important element in a movie. While good dialogue
is always savored, without the proper structure, characters and pacing,
whatever the characters say will be meaningless.
Now you've watched and read movies and scripts; what to do next?
Hmmm . . .oh, I know -- WRITE THEM! Some great author called it the
"Seat of the Pants" method of learning writing: apply the seat of your
pants (or skirt, kilt, etc.) to a chair and begin writing and don't move
it from there until you have done so. Write, write, write!
Then get feedback, not just from friends and family, but people who actually
know scripts: professional authors, teachers . . . anyone you can get a
hold of that knows the medium can give you constructive criticism. Because
you know what you have to do next? RE-write!! Writing
is re-writing, so get used to it now and get going!!
Back to the questions
Can you recommend some good books for a beginning
screenwriter?
Sure can!
FOUR SCREENPLAYS by Syd Field
Forget his landmark book, SCREENPLAY, the first mass published book
on screenwriting. Some have found it helpful and it does lay out
the fundamental principles that almost all other books preach, but subsequent
books have done it better. This book, however, takes four scripts,
including THELMA & LOUISE and DANCES WITH WOLVES and looks at them,
their authors and the stories behind the creation of the stories in-depth.
It takes some of the technical screenwriting philosophy of his first books
and applies it to real-life scripts, making both more understandable.
SCREENWRITING 434 by Lew Hunter (Perigee Books, Putnam)
As a screenwriting teacher, I greatly appreciate this book because it
was written by a screenwriting teacher from UCLA; it's laid out in a very
usable and reasonable manner. Also, he's the only author to
put his pen where his mouth is -- he writes a full length script, going
through all the steps he asks you to do. And the real . . . well,
I'm going to give him the benefit of the doubt and say genius of
this plan is that the script he's writing is so bad that it inspires you
to feel you can certainly do better!
THE SCREENWRITER'S BIBLE by David Trottier
A good, solid all-around screenwriting tome, from soup-to-nuts.
WRITING SCREENPLAYS THAT SELL by Michael Hauge (Harper Perennial)
I hate the title and I'm not sold on a lot of his screenwriting ideas,
but it does contain the very best pratical hands-on section on what to
do after you have written and rewritten your script, especially
in regards to trying to get an agent.
MAKING A GOOD SCRIPT GREAT by Linda Seger (Samuel French Trade)
A very good book, although as the title suggests, better for rewriting
a script. It makes more sense and is more useful once you have finished
the first draft and taken a step back to look at, well, how to make it
better.
STANDARD SCRIPT FORMATS - PART I (SCREENPLAY) by Cole/Haag (CMC Publishing)
Got a question on format? Here's the bible. But do be careful:
it addresses both feature film format and taped TV shows. Make sure
you read the opening section that explains how the book is laid out.
THE CRAFT OF THE SCREENWRITER by John Brady (Simon and Schuster)
A classic compilation of interviews with some of the masters of screenwriting:
William Goldman, Paul Schrader, et al.
THE NEW SCREENWRITER LOOKS AT THE NEW SCREENWRITER by William Froug
(Silman-James Press, distributed Samuel French Trade)
A compilation of interviews with contemporary screenwriters working
to become masters.
Back to the questions
I know Syd Fields' three-act paradigm is very popular,
but do you have to write screenplays that way?
No...but I have to ask, what is your goal with your script? Do
you want to be a rich, fat-cat studio writer? Then the answer is
YES! Just look at the overwhelming majority of studio releases and
you'll see that they are constructed in three-act structures. But
then, 99% of ALL movies are based on a three-act structure, even independent
and off-beat movies. All the three-act paradigm really comes down to is
this:
ACT 1: Setting up characters, character relationships, basic plot elements
and something that gets the main character or characters off on a journey
or exploration for something they want.
ACT 2: The main character or characters come up against obstacles in
the pursuit of this thing or things they want. They try to deal with
these obstacles and in doing so reveal themsleves more fully to us.
ACT 3: The main character or characters move toward and -- usually past
-- the greatest obstacle in the way and reach the opportunity to achieve
what is it they want. Most of the time they get it, but sometimes
the experience of getting there has changed them so much that they no longer
wish to have what they originally thought they want. (Michael J. Fox's
semi-recent DOC HOLLYWOOD is an example of this: he wants to be a Beverly
Hills plastic surgeon, gets stuck in a small Georgia town, has to spend most of the movie getting out of there, finally
arrives in Beverly Hills and obtains the opportunity to achieve his goal
of being a plastic surgeon, but because of his experience in the Georgia
town, no longer wants to that. But the goal of becoming a plastic
surgeon in Beverly Hills provides the narrative engine of the story.)
And that's all the three act paradigm really is: Beginning, Middle and
End. My questionable analogy is this: 99% of all cars have four wheels,
an engine and a space for occupants. From those three "restrictions,"
we have everything from Volkswagen beetles to Porsches, Edsels to Rolls
Royces, a redneck truck to a family passenger van, etc., etc., etc. Most
vehicles have the engine up front, some have it in the rear and some sports
cars even have it in the "middle," right behind the passenger area but in front of the rear axle. What I'm trying to say, there
are LOTSA ways to tell a story and still have a semblance of a 3 Act paradigm.
STAR WARS uses it obviously; PULP FICTION uses it very slyly, but there
still are three acts at work there, fulfilling the functions of the different
acts.
Now if you wish to make truly experimental and avante-garde pictures
where style or tonality or whatever is what you're really going for, then
no, you don't need a stereotypical 3 Act paradigm. An audience, maybe,
but not a 3 Act paradigm. ;->
Back to the questions
Do I have to have a complete spec script written
to interest a producer? Or is a treatment or even just an idea enough?
The only way to sell just a treatment or idea is to have direct access
to the people who do the buying of "pitches." Unless that person
is your uncle or neighbor, then 99% of the time you're going to have to
go through an agent to get to that buyer, but you CAN'T get an agent until
you write a full length, complete script. An agent will not send
you into such a buyer unless they know you can deliver on a pitch with
a well-written script, and they can't tell that until you write one.
A friend of mine in LA who works in development says they're not so much
looking for ideas as people who can execute ideas well.
So, sorry, the bad news is you have to write the whole damn thing!
;->
Back to the questions
Do I have to have an agent to sell my screenplay?
How do I get one?
No you don't HAVE to have one . . .but unless you are a real hustler-dealer,
you will find it very, VERY helpful. NOT the end-all, be-all of your
problems in becoming a working writer, trust me, but very helpful indeed.
What it takes to sell a script is knowing the people who buy them, and
that's what an agent's job is -- to know who's buying what. Without
an agent, you can still sell a script, but you will find all of your time
taken up with doing that and nothing else. Plus, you'll have trouble
submitting scripts to entities who will not look at material that doesn't
come through a recognized representative such as an agent or entertainment attorney. I don't want to say that having an agent
is the ONLY way to sell a script, because it surely isn't, but for most
people, it is the best way.
Now, how do you get one? That's a long and sordid story, best
told I think on SCRNWRiT's website.
SCRNWRiT's the screenwriter's email listserv administered by Jack Stanley
from The University of Tex-Pan American and they have an excellent Agent
FAQ there that goes into good detail about the process of getting one.
Use the link above to go to their website, or visit it at <http://www.panam.edu/scrnwrit>,
and look for the Agent FAQ.
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